Commanding Conversation

I worte a commanding coversation.

First I picked a opion of images, the image that I choose was some people hanging out at the mall.

Then I brainstormed what storys I could write, my story that I wote was about some friends hanging out at the mall and disscusing where they should eat and hang out next.

I enjoyed this task it helps me on my imagination. I did well on writing my story. I think I need to improve on writing a longer and more improved story.