My presentation score

This week I presentated a book about sharks

First we read a book called sharks, this book was about different types of shark and facts about sharks

My slide was after max he talked about what are sharks, my slide was about shark species I talked about different types of shark species, how much shark species are there in the world, and the rarest shark species in the world.

Then we wrote our presentation,we all got our own parts some people got 2 parts because 2 people in our group was absent, Max said the slide What are sharks, I said the shark species, Wyatt said the strongest extinct sharks, Kane said the biggest shark in New Zealand, Max and Kaysorn said the shark lengths, Kaysorn said what great sharks eat, lastly Aarush said where do sharks live.

Overall my groups scored 2 not achieved and 1 excellence, the first not achieved was less than the minimal information requirement, and the second not achieved was less than the minimal speech requirement, and the applies to all members of the group. Our excellence was we followed all the print design rules, coherent style (layout, colour scheme etc.) last we have the visually appealing.

I need to improve on speaking louder, I also have to improve on looking at the audience more when I speak.